The history of Loano
DRAFT 2(EDITED). THE HISTORY OF LOANO
Lonao sub-district located in Purworejo Regency, Central Java Province originates from a story known as the ancient book entitled "Babat Tanah Loano".Around the 13th century AD the kingdom of Loano was establish.The name Loano originated from the story of Ki Betoro Loano's journey wandering up to the edge of Bogowonto River and discovering the "Lo"flower around Bogowonto River , so that he made this area the Loano Perdikan area.With time , this land of Perdikan increasingly developed so he founded a small kingdom called Loano.
The story in "Babad Tanah Loano "became often grounded for the Loano.The most interesting story from story of Babad Tanah Loano was when Prince Anden Loano married Retno Marlangen from Majapahit, apparently did not get a place in Prince Joyokusumo's heart.This brief marriage was disturbed by this Prince.Until finally between Prince Anden Loano and Prince Joyokusumo became hot until the match war,until Prince Anden Loano suffered defeat.This fight continued until the intervening of Ki Betoro Loano.King-King Kiani:Ki Betoro Loano, Anden Loano 1, Anden Loano 2, dan Anden Loano 3.
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Febi, your problems on your DRAFT II is same with your writing in DRAFT I, those are the use of punctuation and spelling, please check it more detail. :) For example, the space after the punctuation such as comma and full stop. The the speeling of the word " eslablished" it should be "establish" so please check and edit the whole of your writing. Be thorough on your writing, Febi. That is all my feedback please check it and edit it. After that make it into DRAFT II (EDITED) then share it on your blog. Keep writing :)
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