Bandung Lautan Api
DRAFT 1(EDITED). Bandung Lautan Api
Bandung Events Lautan Api is a major fire event that happen in the city of Bandung , West Java Provinsi, Indonesia on March 23 and 24 , 1946, within 7 hours about 200.000 Bandung residents burned theirs homes, leaving the city to the mountain in the southern area of Bandung .This was done the prevent the Dutch allies and NICA Soldier s from using the city of Bandung as a strategic military headquarters in the Indonesian was of Independence.
The term Bandung Lautan Api became a well-known term after the scorching event General Natution was General of TRI at a meeting on Regentsweg (now Jalan Dewi Sartika , after returning from his meeting with Sutan Syahrir in Jakarta , decided on a strategy to be implemented on Bandung after receiving an ultimatum.
The term Bandung Ocean of Fire also appeared in Suara Merdeka daily on March 26,1946,a jurnalist at that time , Atje Bastaman, witnessed the burning scene of Bandung from Mount Leutik Hill arround Pameungpeuk , Garut.From that peak , Atje Bastaman saw Bandung bloshing from the Cicadas to Cimindi .
After arriving in Tasikmalaya , Atje Bastaman enthusiastically immediately wrote the news and gave the title "Bandoeng Djadi Laoetan Api".However due to the lack of space for writing the title , the news title was shortened to "Bandoeng Laoetan Api"
To commemorate the events of Bandung Sea of Fire in the Tegallega Field area .The Monument of Bandung Lautan Api was built.Every March 23, Bandung residents often commemorate the event by Carrying out a torch rally around the city of Bandung.
Sumber:https://infobandung.co.id/tahukah-kamu-sejarah-singkat-peristiwa-bandung-lautan-api/
Hi, Febi. It is a a good writing. I found a little mistake on your writing. Please re-check and edit your writing. So, here I found the incorrect of the use of punctuation and spelling. For example, in the sentence of "...he city of Bandung ,West Java Provinsi,Indonesia on March 23 and 24 1946,within 7 hours about "he city of Bandung ,West Java Provinsi,Indonesia on March 23 and 24 1946,within 7 hours about..." after comma you should add space, please check the whole sentence on your writing. I found a lot of problem in adding space. Then for the word, "occured" it should be "occurred" please check your dictionary. Then in the sentence of "...Merdeka daily on March 26,1946,a young jurnalist..." It should be "journalist" Overaal your problems are in the use of punctuation and spelling, so please check it and edit it. After you edited your writing please make it into DRAFT I (EDITED) then share it on your blog. Keep writing, Febi :)
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